![]() Maybe all of that wouldn’t have left me feeling like I might have wasted a credit if I didn’t truly believe the narration contributed significantly to the flow. No real suspense building so that by the time one important arc came up, it was rushed and I was too distracted by the characters’ ridiculousness for going away without guards. ![]() The remainder of the story was also just there. The love connection had just enough shared to make you feel like it worked but I felt I had to fill in too many blanks and I found myself thinking more time have past than really did in the storyline for the main characters to have such an working relationship. ![]() It’s a slow roll story even with several elements that were intended to build suspense and/or intrigue. By the time this story ended, I was ready for it to end. ![]()
0 Comments
Leave a Reply. |